Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines.
Sirens
waltzing on ebb
swaying, spinning, chanting
inebriated as Furies
wistful
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines.
Sirens
waltzing on ebb
swaying, spinning, chanting
inebriated as Furies
wistful
madasahatter572 
Very good opening and charming scene.
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Anita, I would agree my opening is very impressive for first attempt. 😉 Thank You again for the read and comment(s).
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I love this! Splendid imagery and use of the form. xo
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MW, thank you for the read and compliment. I didn’t even think about the form, but I definitely wanted to convey some form of beauty to the readers as I was seeing the scene/idea in my mind. 😉
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Mission accomplished! ❤️👍
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It’s always a delight to the senses to read your words and a connective experience.
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I’ve never been one to use formats like these for poetry as I could never remember the rules 😁
But you do them well. Congrats.
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Thank You so much for the read and encouraging comments. I definitely look forward to more postings. 😉 And I look forward to more of your postings. 🙂
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You’re welcome. ☺
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I could actually image this in my mind- what a pleasure 🙂
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Thank You tmezpoetry, it was quite the fun to create this little ditty. 😉
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