Catching her schoolgirl face
as she comes close, we kiss –
for longer than anytime else.
Youth rebels and wants
drown her in kisses
and rivers of tongue.
The school bus approaches,
I kick gravel, grumbling
and sit beside her to steal another kiss.
Vivid, passionate and fun!
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noblethemes, Thank You always for your encouraging words. And I’m happy that you enjoyed this little piece. It definitely took some time to put together. π
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You have perfectly captured the drama and angst of a distant memory…another lifetime ago.
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MW, Thank You again for the read and comment. And I agree totally, the writing, creating the short little ditty was quite the drama (dramatic) effort for me too. π
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Being a teen was all about drama (soooo many feelings!) and teenage angst.
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I think the same can be said for adulthood too. π
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Haha! Ain’t it the truth! I’ve known a few drama addicts in my day.
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Love the imagery
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A @ moylomenterprises, my apologizes for the late delay, but Thank You for the read and comment. π
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Oh no worries. Love your work. Hope you’re well π· βΊ
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I am well, thank you for inquiring. I look forward to more of your daily postings.
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Thank you. βΊ
Have a great day!
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I was about to ask exactly how old you were you lady! haha And yes, liked the poem, yes adult drama is actually better because we can shimmy must have dinner or show, and yes we still have that rebel youth in us π
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π It was definitely a tough write, but I’m so excited about the end results. And of course, very elated that others can take enjoyment from the words too. π
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