lostness
reaching…
ocean bed
lost petals
and
sinking soundlessly
plunging into murky depths
rays of hope
or
hurricane season –
secret lovers falling into
depths of spring
senryu
Response to Carpe Diem #1479 abandoned boat
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lostness
reaching…
ocean bed
lost petals
and
sinking soundlessly
plunging into murky depths
rays of hope
or
hurricane season –
secret lovers falling into
depths of spring
senryu
Response to Carpe Diem #1479 abandoned boat
Your series is awesome, but your third is for sure my favorite. Well done.
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Many, Many thanks, Chevrefeuille. 😎🥀
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Yes, the third flows beautifully!
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Thank You, Lynn_ for taking the time to read and comment on my posting. (@–>–)
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My pleasure! I like your website name (especially since my url is madhatterpoetry.com)
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