in CARPE DIEM, HAIKU, POETRY, POETRY FORMS, TANKA 40 Words

HAIL

a sparrow’s breath
in a freak hailstorm
in frosty air

haiku
Copyright © Dorna Hainds

a sparrow’s breath
in a freak hailstorm
in frosty air
loses its identity
forever alone

tanka
Copyright © Dorna Hainds

Response to Carpe Diem #1644 Hail (modern kigo)

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